Tuesday 25 March 2014

Sand : Haiku

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Etched in sand                                                         
Temporary it is
May ‘we’ sustain forever though

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Like castles, we built of sand
Wish life could be molded
Like we wanted


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You never realize
How quick they grow
And like sand, time slips away





This is written for Haiku Horizons Prompt # 5 – ‘SAND’

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36 comments:

  1. Thomas Charles MacInnes25 March 2014 at 06:54

    What beautiful poems; all of them touch the heart by being so personal. Your first haiku is like mine but, you did me two better so, good for you. I shall learn from your work and do better in the future. It is how we grow. :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia26 March 2014 at 23:24

      Hey Tom. Just visited you. Yes, we were on the same page with my first one here.. You are being kind with your words. But yes, so rightly said, that's how we grow.. !! Lovely to have you here :)

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  2. Anonymous25 March 2014 at 09:23

    What nice poems.

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  3. Red Handed25 March 2014 at 09:40

    Nice take!!Loved the last one the most.

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  4. Soumya25 March 2014 at 09:57

    The last one was awesome! :)

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  5. Locomente25 March 2014 at 10:29

    I loved all of them...
    Lovely... Lovely!

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  6. Midnight scribbles25 March 2014 at 11:32

    oh wow. lovely! best for last!

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  7. Amrit Sinha25 March 2014 at 11:42

    Sand, life and time, always so synonymous ... loved your deep insights :-)

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  8. Anonymous25 March 2014 at 23:21

    you are a philosopher,Jyotsna ! keep the wheel rolling !

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia26 March 2014 at 23:27

      Haha... Glad you liked them Milan :) I hope the wheel keeps rolling ;)

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  9. Sumana Roy25 March 2014 at 23:46

    the touch of emptiness grips the heart....specially the last one...beautifully written lines...

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  10. cheryl26 March 2014 at 06:21

    Thoughtful haiku Jyotsna

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  11. Reshma26 March 2014 at 07:32

    Two lovely wishes and a wise third one. Loved each of your trio Jyotsna.

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  12. Shilpa Garg26 March 2014 at 10:47

    Loved all 3... so profound and Amen to the first two :)

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  13. Magical Mystical Teacher26 March 2014 at 17:47

    You mold a life as best you can and keep on going!

    Cemetery Sand & Red

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  14. payal agarwal26 March 2014 at 20:06

    I loved them all.. specially the second one! Indeed,time slips away..

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia26 March 2014 at 23:32

      Thank you Payal.. Yes, time does slip way :)

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  15. Philip Verghese 'Ariel'26 March 2014 at 21:17

    Hi Jyotsna,
    Good to meet yet another Indian blogger at A to Z pages
    Well versed Haiku, will come again to read more.
    Nice to be here, I am here via A to Z blog page,
    Good to know that you registered for this years challenge.
    A Warm Welcome Abroad.
    Hey, I just noticed that you haven't embedded a to z logo at your sidebar. kindly do it.
    Have a happy blogging time ahead.
    Keep informed.
    Best Regards
    Philip of philipscom http://www.pvariel.com

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia26 March 2014 at 23:36

      Hey Philip, nice to meet you too.. And thanks for visiting. So glad to have you here and thank you for the warm welcome. I just added the badge.. Hope to see you around. Happy blogging to you too :):)

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  16. Reading Pleasure26 March 2014 at 23:39

    Ow, these are so lovely! :-)

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  17. Unknown27 March 2014 at 06:21

    I like them all! Sand is ever shifting isn't it?

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  18. KParthasarathi27 March 2014 at 16:45

    It is hard to tell which one is better.All of them are lovely.

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  19. Tarang Sinha31 March 2014 at 08:29

    Beautiful set indeed!! I can't decide which one is my favourite!:)

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