Thursday 13 February 2014

Love Gone Wrong - 33 words

Her temper was blamed for their breakup. He was tagged into a facebook status announcing a wedding after three years of relationship. Alas, she had broken up with him only a year back.   





This post is written for Trifextra Week -102, where we are supposed to write 33 words about love gone wrong. But following words cannot be used –
love, sad, tears, wept, heart, pain

35 comments:

  1. The perils of Facebook :)

    Enjoyed

    Ally

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    1. Perils ? Can be considered a blessing too if seen the other way round.. Glad you enjoyed Ally.. Welcome to my space :)

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  2. Um ooooops! And damn facebook! Thanks for linking up and don't forget to vote!

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    1. Loved being a part of this.. Ofcourse I would vote :)

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  3. Your title is perfect, as are the 33 words that go with it! Wonderful writing!!

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    1. Thankyou Valerie.. Glad you liked what I wrote.. And glad to have to you on my blog as well :)

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  4. Ouch. Facebook doesn't keep secrets :)

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    1. Yes, yikes.. Ouch.. Oops.. :( Thanks for being here Draug !!

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  6. Yes Renada.. Facebook does unveil a lot .. Welcome to my blog.. Hope you like it here :)

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  7. Oh indeed.. the double deceit... and facebook has been the arena of sadness.

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  8. ohh the deceit! Nice one Jyotsna!

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  9. only in thirty three words! how profound <3

    Richa

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  10. JUst 33 words and so well told.

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  11. Oh that *beep*!!!
    Well written! (Incited my anger at an imaginary character!)

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  12. Oh that freak! I feel like killing such men. It's a coincidence that I just wrote a post on similar lines.

    http://soumya-hintofme.blogspot.com/2014/02/l-for-loser.html

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    1. Yeah, that freak !! Off to read your take Soumya.. Glad to have you here :)

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  13. 33 Words and so much already expressed! WOW, Jyotsna :)

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