Sunday, 5 January 2014

My Little Sister

Nope, not from Google :P
Two years later than me you came                                     
Yeah, we even look a little same
My guinea pig you were
From hairstyles to baked dishes
You were made to sit through against your wishes
Always fighting, our squabbles in the house all around
On each other’s nerves, we are often found
But, dare anybody say anything against me or my rights
You are out with your swords ready to fight with all your might
I know I don’t ever show how much I love you
In these little words, I would say that Companion for life I would be to you!!




This post is shared with Write Tribe's 100 Words on Saturday - 2014 # 1 and the prompt is – My Little Sister
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36 comments:

  1. Anonymous5 January 2014 at 04:33

    Nice words!

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia5 January 2014 at 17:33

      Thanks a lot Lily.. Lovely to have you here :)

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  2. Anonymous5 January 2014 at 05:46

    It's beautiful! Totally share the sentiments... :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia5 January 2014 at 17:40

      Thanks a lot.. And you are welcome to this space too <3<3

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  3. Nabanita5 January 2014 at 10:00

    beautiful! feel the same sentiments :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia5 January 2014 at 17:35

      Thanks a lot Nabanita.. Yes read yours too :)

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  4. Pratikshya5 January 2014 at 10:38

    heart felt lines...

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  5. Unknown5 January 2014 at 11:05

    Dee, Its really beautiful. We all love you. :*

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  6. payal agarwal5 January 2014 at 14:01

    sweet poem..:)

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  7. Anonymous5 January 2014 at 15:21

    hey, it's such a beautiful and amazing poem. Both of you look soo beautiful:)

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  8. Unknown5 January 2014 at 17:17

    Wah! such a sweet poem. Love between sisters is unique....nothing to match it.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia5 January 2014 at 17:39

      Ushaji, your 'Wah' makes me smile even more.. Yes, love between sisters is unique <3<3

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  9. MSI Sakib5 January 2014 at 18:41

    Great love between two beautiful lady............................ it awesome.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia6 January 2014 at 22:56

      Thank you :) Two beautiful ladies are smiling now ;)

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  10. Englepappa/ Ole JN5 January 2014 at 19:29

    A beautiful text to your sister!

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  11. Unknown5 January 2014 at 22:43

    Love u sis... Speechless!!

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  12. kalpana solsi5 January 2014 at 23:47

    lovely poem showing the closeness you both share. loved the rhyme pattern. keep it up.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia6 January 2014 at 22:58

      Thank you Kalpana.. Glad I could portray what I wanted to.. Your 'keep it up' boosts me :)

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  13. Locomente6 January 2014 at 10:33

    Aw... This is so sweet!
    And you both indeed look similar!
    Nice...

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia6 January 2014 at 22:59

      Thank you Locomente.. Yes, somewhat similar !!

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  14. Aayesha S Hakim6 January 2014 at 12:05

    such a sweet confession Jyotsna :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia6 January 2014 at 23:00

      Aww.. Ayesha, your 'sweet confession' makes me so happy.. Glad you liked my words..

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  15. Shilpa Garg6 January 2014 at 21:59

    The beautiful bond of sisterhood! Beautifully expressed :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia6 January 2014 at 23:00

      Oh yes.. the bond of sisterhood.. Thanks Shilpa :)

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  16. Sreeja Praveen7 January 2014 at 15:36

    Lovely post :-) Beautiful poem , Your sis is lucky :)

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  17. Pavan Patel14 January 2014 at 13:57

    Grt...beyond words :) :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia19 January 2014 at 15:33

      Thanks Buddy.. I knew you would love this one for sure :)

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  18. Mysterio18 January 2014 at 21:41

    Biutiful ;)

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