Sunday, 5 January 2014

Clap : Haiku

Joy emanates within
Warm heart overflows
Happiness hands display

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On new path, they criticize
Let success kiss your feet
Claps all around

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Witnessing my child's first win
Tears racing on my cheeks
Drums in my hands



This post is shared with Haiku Heights # 316 and the prompt is CLAP
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35 comments:

  1. Aayesha S Hakim5 January 2014 at 12:19

    happiness hands display! wow! loved it :D

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  2. Unknown5 January 2014 at 13:01

    Very beautiful expression.!

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  3. Ramesh Sood5 January 2014 at 13:15

    Yes, the line is very creative and beautiful as mentioned by Aayesha...

    Well done..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/01/clap-clap-clap-clap-clap-haiku.html

    RS

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  4. Tarang Sinha5 January 2014 at 13:24

    Really nice set!:)

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  5. Milan Rajkumar6 January 2014 at 04:02

    beautiful !

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  6. Unknown6 January 2014 at 09:08

    I love all three but especially the last one. It is brilliant!~ ♥

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia6 January 2014 at 22:38

      Thank you Kathy.. Oh yes, Motherhood is special for every mother :)

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  7. kalpana solsi6 January 2014 at 13:53

    can identify with the third one. lovely haiku.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia6 January 2014 at 22:38

      The Mommy heart melts and connects at the third one.. Isn't it Kalpana ??

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  8. Anmol Rawat6 January 2014 at 14:32

    third one is the best one for me though all are good. :)

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  9. Unknown6 January 2014 at 17:41

    wow...beautiful...all of them :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia6 January 2014 at 22:40

      Thank you Apurva.. Glad you liked my work :):)

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  10. Amrit Sinha7 January 2014 at 10:38

    A beautiful set .... Claps for you :-)

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  11. Lmkazmierczak7 January 2014 at 14:52

    Enjoyed the progression...Drumming my thoughts after reading this inspiration♪ http://lauriekazmierczak.com/taking-flight/

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia7 January 2014 at 23:19

      Welcome to my space :) Thank you for appreciating :)

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  12. Reshma8 January 2014 at 03:53

    Loved the phrase "Happiness hands display", there are no limits to a mother's joy. Nicely crafted trio.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia10 January 2014 at 10:24

      Thanks Reshma..I agree, there are no limits to a mother's joy :)

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  13. Locomente8 January 2014 at 11:59

    Lovely set...
    I loved "Let success kiss your feet"
    Nice!

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  14. Anonymous8 January 2014 at 15:39

    Liked them all, esp the drum rolls...

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia11 January 2014 at 19:15

      Thank you and welcome to my space.. Glad to have you around :)

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  15. Unknown8 January 2014 at 22:31

    Beautiful imagery.

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  16. Jyotsna Bhatia11 January 2014 at 19:16

    Oh yes, so rightly said Ashwini :)

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  17. asteria's canvass12 January 2014 at 01:59

    how visual and apt.

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  18. Tarusha12 January 2014 at 23:45

    Such a great set.
    Kudos!

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia19 January 2014 at 15:46

      Thank you so much Tarusha.. Lovely to have you here :)

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