Sunday, 5 January 2014

Clap : Haiku

Joy emanates within
Warm heart overflows
Happiness hands display

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On new path, they criticize
Let success kiss your feet
Claps all around

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Witnessing my child's first win
Tears racing on my cheeks
Drums in my hands



This post is shared with Haiku Heights # 316 and the prompt is CLAP

36 comments:

  1. happiness hands display! wow! loved it :D

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  2. Yes, the line is very creative and beautiful as mentioned by Aayesha...

    Well done..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/01/clap-clap-clap-clap-clap-haiku.html

    RS

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    1. Thanks a lot Milan.. Welcome to my blog :)

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  4. I love all three but especially the last one. It is brilliant!~ ♥

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    1. Thank you Kathy.. Oh yes, Motherhood is special for every mother :)

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  5. can identify with the third one. lovely haiku.

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    1. The Mommy heart melts and connects at the third one.. Isn't it Kalpana ??

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  6. third one is the best one for me though all are good. :)

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    1. Thank you Apurva.. Glad you liked my work :):)

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  8. A beautiful set .... Claps for you :-)

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  9. Enjoyed the progression...Drumming my thoughts after reading this inspiration♪ http://lauriekazmierczak.com/taking-flight/

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    1. Welcome to my space :) Thank you for appreciating :)

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  10. Loved the phrase "Happiness hands display", there are no limits to a mother's joy. Nicely crafted trio.

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    1. Thanks Reshma..I agree, there are no limits to a mother's joy :)

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  11. Lovely set...
    I loved "Let success kiss your feet"
    Nice!

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  12. Liked them all, esp the drum rolls...

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    1. Thank you and welcome to my space.. Glad to have you around :)

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  13. There is nothing which can make one happier, than the happiness that comes from within :-)

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    1. Thank you so much Tarusha.. Lovely to have you here :)

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