Sunday, 15 June 2014

Nights of Summer - Haiku

how I wish my mind
was perhaps as crystal clear
as summer night sky



Written for Carpe Diem Haiku # 492 – Nights of Summer
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30 comments:

  1. *Dark Angel*16 June 2014 at 00:03

    Beautiful, even I wrote a line about night sky today, though it isn't a haiku! :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia20 June 2014 at 19:14

      Thanks dear. Hopping on to read yours now :)

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  2. Anonymous16 June 2014 at 02:32

    Awesome haiku in response on our prompt for today ... welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. My name is Kristjaan, but as a haiku-poet I am Chèvrefeuille your host at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. Hope to see you here again. Namaste.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia20 June 2014 at 19:24

      Thank you for the warm welcome Kristjaan. I would love to be there again :) :)

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  3. PirateGunn16 June 2014 at 02:35

    THAT is very sharp - wonderful haiku

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  4. Anonymous16 June 2014 at 06:55

    Very nice! :)

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  5. The Side I Hide16 June 2014 at 12:41

    Amazing! :)

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  6. Bikram16 June 2014 at 15:38

    and heres wishing that your wish comes true always :)

    lovely haiku


    Bikram

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  7. Mark16 June 2014 at 17:45

    That's the kind of clarity many of us long for!

    Steamy Crickets

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  8. Ankita 16 June 2014 at 21:28

    really lovely :)

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  9. kalpana solsi16 June 2014 at 21:42

    Eventually the summer night will clear the mind.Sharp haiku.

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  10. Aayesha S Hakim16 June 2014 at 23:23

    How I wish too :)
    Nicely done, Jyotsna :)

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  11. Red Handed17 June 2014 at 10:13

    How I wish the same too. AWESOME!

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  12. brudberg17 June 2014 at 19:35

    I agree...

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  13. Gayu19 June 2014 at 14:28

    Same pinch Jyo, nice take on the Haiku!

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  14. Midnight scribbles20 June 2014 at 11:15

    Beautiful beautiful!

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  15. Vandana Sharma20 June 2014 at 15:46

    The beauty and essence of a summer night described beautifully.

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  16. Ankita 20 June 2014 at 20:09

    thats a lovely haiku with nice imagery :)

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  17. Saurabh Chawla22 June 2014 at 15:33

    wow ji wow :) a very nice haiku :)

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  18. Vinodini22 June 2014 at 23:00

    Ah if only our minds would be as clear as that?! Wishful thinking :)
    Loved the summery feel of these lines.

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  19. Rat26 June 2014 at 00:31

    beautiful and clear :)

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