Sunday, 15 June 2014

Nights of Summer - Haiku

how I wish my mind
was perhaps as crystal clear
as summer night sky



34 comments:

  1. Beautiful, even I wrote a line about night sky today, though it isn't a haiku! :)

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    1. Thanks dear. Hopping on to read yours now :)

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  2. Awesome haiku in response on our prompt for today ... welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. My name is Kristjaan, but as a haiku-poet I am Chèvrefeuille your host at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. Hope to see you here again. Namaste.

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    1. Thank you for the warm welcome Kristjaan. I would love to be there again :) :)

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  3. THAT is very sharp - wonderful haiku

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  4. and heres wishing that your wish comes true always :)

    lovely haiku


    Bikram

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  5. That's the kind of clarity many of us long for!

    Steamy Crickets

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  6. Eventually the summer night will clear the mind.Sharp haiku.

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  7. How I wish too :)
    Nicely done, Jyotsna :)

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  8. How I wish the same too. AWESOME!

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  9. Same pinch Jyo, nice take on the Haiku!

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  10. The beauty and essence of a summer night described beautifully.

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  11. thats a lovely haiku with nice imagery :)

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  12. wow ji wow :) a very nice haiku :)

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  13. Ah if only our minds would be as clear as that?! Wishful thinking :)
    Loved the summery feel of these lines.

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