Wednesday, 4 June 2014

Retreat : Haiku


unhappiness floats
in eyes, when I am around
retreating from me?



22 comments:

  1. Wow, this three lines speak so much! You are awesome <3

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  2. how did u even think of this?
    AWESOME.

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  3. Jyotsna You have said so much in these three lines. Superb !

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  4. hmmm why so sad ..

    although a lovely haiku

    Bikram

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    1. Well.. that's all I could think of in terms of 'retreat'.. Thanks Bikram.

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  5. Some questions find no answers :-(

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