Sunday, 17 November 2013

BLOOD : Haiku

Empty my heart out
Editing it has gone through
Stains on my paper

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Ah, your memories
Flows through veins of mortal me
Pumping life within

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Food for me it is
Don’t judge, I was made that way
Vampire is my name

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Different our skins
Whilst the Blood colour is same
Why this hatred then 


P.S. - This post is shared with Haiku Heights # 309 and the prompt is BLOOD


39 comments:

  1. love the clarity and strength in all four......amused at the third one......

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    1. Hi Vera, Thank you for appreciating :)

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  3. Beautiful haiku. Loved the second.

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  4. Hi Jyotsna this is a very fragrant bouquet of Haiku. We are on the same track in the last one.

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    1. Oh Wow, Ushaji.. Thats a beautiful way of putting it.. Yes.. Yess.. I read yours too..

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  5. stains on my paper
    wet crimson turned arid brown
    poured out from my heart

    Very nice set. This is my response to the first.

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    1. Heyaa.. Oh my God !! This is so so beautifully penned ... Just Loved it :) :)

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  6. Beautifully done Jyotsna, loved the last two the most :)

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    1. Thank you for the comment Reshma :) Glad you liked my words :)

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  7. particularly like the second one

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  8. You wrote so many haiku on the same prompt! Amazing! Well I know haiku are addictive :)

    Richa

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    1. Thank you for reading Richa. and Yes, as you had said earlier, I am getting addicted to them ;)

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  9. The last one is so true. and the vampire one was really scary. a nice bouquet of haiku.

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  10. So mesmerising and beautiful haiku. :) Loved them all

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    1. Thank you for reading Harshal. Glad to have you here :)

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  11. Brilliant haiku. I loved all three! ♥

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  12. What a fabulous set! Each one is a gem.

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  13. Vampire is my name
    I'll have a bloody mary
    my favorite drink
    ;-)

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  14. All of them are so lovely to read.. :)

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  15. Very well penned. All different yet fresh.

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  16. loved the take on the prompt and clarity of the thoughts is well expressed :)

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  17. Wordless to praise you here ! Lovely !! :)

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