Sunday, 17 November 2013

BLOOD : Haiku

Empty my heart out
Editing it has gone through
Stains on my paper

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Ah, your memories
Flows through veins of mortal me
Pumping life within

*****

Food for me it is
Don’t judge, I was made that way
Vampire is my name

*****

Different our skins
Whilst the Blood colour is same
Why this hatred then 


P.S. - This post is shared with Haiku Heights # 309 and the prompt is BLOOD


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38 comments:

  1. Sumana Roy17 November 2013 at 15:35

    love the clarity and strength in all four......amused at the third one......

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  2. Empty nester at last18 November 2013 at 05:09

    Awesome...love the third one!

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  3. Saru Singhal18 November 2013 at 15:19

    Beautiful haiku. Loved the second.

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  4. Unknown18 November 2013 at 17:01

    Hi Jyotsna this is a very fragrant bouquet of Haiku. We are on the same track in the last one.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia19 November 2013 at 10:55

      Oh Wow, Ushaji.. Thats a beautiful way of putting it.. Yes.. Yess.. I read yours too..

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  5. Reading Pleasure18 November 2013 at 21:37

    Beautifully done!

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  6. Anonymous18 November 2013 at 23:53

    stains on my paper
    wet crimson turned arid brown
    poured out from my heart

    Very nice set. This is my response to the first.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia19 November 2013 at 10:58

      Heyaa.. Oh my God !! This is so so beautifully penned ... Just Loved it :) :)

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  7. Reshma19 November 2013 at 05:38

    Beautifully done Jyotsna, loved the last two the most :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia19 November 2013 at 10:57

      Thank you for the comment Reshma :) Glad you liked my words :)

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  8. Pealogic19 November 2013 at 16:08

    particularly like the second one

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  9. Richa Singh19 November 2013 at 21:03

    You wrote so many haiku on the same prompt! Amazing! Well I know haiku are addictive :)

    Richa

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia23 November 2013 at 08:18

      Thank you for reading Richa. and Yes, as you had said earlier, I am getting addicted to them ;)

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  10. kalpana solsi19 November 2013 at 21:52

    The last one is so true. and the vampire one was really scary. a nice bouquet of haiku.

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  11. Unknown20 November 2013 at 14:22

    So mesmerising and beautiful haiku. :) Loved them all

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia23 November 2013 at 08:18

      Thank you for reading Harshal. Glad to have you here :)

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  12. Unknown20 November 2013 at 20:18

    Brilliant haiku. I loved all three! ♥

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  13. Anonymous21 November 2013 at 12:30

    What a fabulous set! Each one is a gem.

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  14. Anonymous21 November 2013 at 12:37

    Vampire is my name
    I'll have a bloody mary
    my favorite drink
    ;-)

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  15. Bhavya Kaushik23 November 2013 at 10:02

    Beautifully done! :)

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  16. Anonymous23 November 2013 at 14:38

    All of them are so lovely to read.. :)

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  17. Indrani23 November 2013 at 21:08

    Very well penned. All different yet fresh.

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  18. Namrota23 November 2013 at 22:20

    Lovely Haikus Jyotsna :)

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  19. Saurabh Chawla24 November 2013 at 22:05

    loved the take on the prompt and clarity of the thoughts is well expressed :)

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  20. Sreeja Praveen18 December 2013 at 13:25

    Wordless to praise you here ! Lovely !! :)

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