Monday, 23 June 2014

Comfort - Haiku

when world is cruel
and emotions unnamed surge
words, you comfort me

*****

tired, broken, angry
life be hard, but mother's lap
of comfort it smells



48 comments:

  1. Heart warming Haiku, light flowing in:)

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  2. i loved both! but the second one touched me deeply...

    :)

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  3. I read this early morning and found it very very Warm indeed ..

    and mothers lap is indeed very comforting

    Bikram

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    1. Indeed Bikram! Glad you liked them :)

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  4. Both Haikus are beautiful in their own ways :)

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  5. Mother's lap.. the world's most comfortable space.. can't be better.. well done..

    Visit me here:
    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/06/a-love-story-haiku.html

    RS

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  6. the first one is a portrait of myself ! you rip open it from my subconscious self ! wonderful ,Jyotsna !

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    1. Glad you could connect with this one :)

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  7. I liked both of them. Pictures of comfort. Well done! ♥

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  8. The second one..OOH the second one. I need it.

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  9. Sometimes only mom can make it all better, still.

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  10. Loved both...
    And no comfort as mother's lap!!!

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  11. The second one is so comforting.

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  12. Jyotsna, I have nominated your name for the Liebster Award. Congratulations.
    For details kindly refer to my post on this topic. (dated 25th june 2014)

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  13. Wow! That's so nicely expressed! You are gifted Jyotsna...!

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    1. You are always so so kind with your comments Sindhu. Your words always bring a smile on my face. Thank you dear :)

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  14. both the haiku were splendid! well done :) enjoyed reading them

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  15. lovely as usual.. like the second one the most :)

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  16. Love the first one. Words are often a comfort.

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    1. Especially for writers !! Thanks for dropping by :)

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  17. Beautiful ... both the haiku :-)

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  18. Words can be comforting, especially when spoken with love.

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  19. Words shared are a great comfort.

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  20. Words can be very comforting. And when there is mother's lap for us..nothing wrong can happen. :')

    Beautiful set of haiku.

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