Tuesday, 23 December 2014

Near - Haiku

his eyes follow mine 
feel him nearer than ever
amidst the thick crowd



29 comments:

  1. That is so beautiful Jyotsna. This can be true for anyone, a daughter and a father, two close friends or even lovers for that matter. Loved it :)

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  2. Very well written Jyotsna! Crowds can't keep loved ones away...:)

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  3. Among the milling crowd , a loved one's presence is felt. beautiful.

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  4. Ahem! Oh ho!
    Quite to the point, like an arrow with a determined aim.

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  5. Has elements of a stalker on the prowl! Good lines JB!

    Hank

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  6. Heart warming and romantic. Very well done.



    Sorry. I'm unable to comment on blogger from my wordpress account. So here is my link:
    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/12/21/end-is-near/

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  7. There is much that can be drawn out of this short poem. Well done.

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    1. Glad to have you here Justin. Thank you :)

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  8. This do happen... So-so happen... When love enwrap...
    Nice!!!

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  9. Beautiful Haiku, Jyotsna! Such romantic feelings come when one experiences love! So, any special news?
    Hey hey, I just wanted to pull your legs, dear! Please don't take it serious ;)

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