& you are on the right track btw..:D Din't feel as if this is your first attempt. I am no pro at haikus but trust me, this is really good!:) Keep up the good work Jyotsna!:)
Haha.. Thank you for saying I am on right track ;) You are being so kind with your words Nikhil !! Btw, just read your first attempt at haiku, and looking to the love you have receivd, you didnt look like a first timer as well :)
its an eco haiku, jyotsna. its the human steps on the carpet that spoils it. as an architect i would say that the concrete jungle spoils the carpet. may be your next haiku could be concrete jungle... while u write sitting within the jungle of files in your office.
Yes, Niravbhai, agree with you.. concrete jungle in a way spoils beautiful natural carpet.. And as for the jungle of files in my office, now since you have given me the wonderful idea, I think I should be writing about it soon.. By the way, haven't seen you around in some time.. Do visit that jungle of files for some chai :)
Good Try ...Best wishes
ReplyDeleteHi Veena, welcome to my space. And thank you for your wishes :)
DeleteGood one.
ReplyDeleteHey Indrani, so sweet of you to read and comment evrytime I write. Really appreciate it :)
DeleteIt's beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteHey Bhavya, nice to see you here.. Thanks :)
DeleteSimple yet very beautifully written!:)
ReplyDeleteWell put Jyotsna!:)
Lovely haiku indeed!:D
Hi Nikhil, thank you for your kind words <3 <3
Delete& you are on the right track btw..:D
DeleteDin't feel as if this is your first attempt. I am no pro at haikus but trust me, this is really good!:)
Keep up the good work Jyotsna!:)
Haha.. Thank you for saying I am on right track ;) You are being so kind with your words Nikhil !! Btw, just read your first attempt at haiku, and looking to the love you have receivd, you didnt look like a first timer as well :)
DeleteThank you for dropping in :)
ReplyDeleteWell done Jyotsna. Very nice first attempt. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank you for motivation Usha :)
Deletenicely written for the prompt and depiction to mother earth as well :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Saurabh.. Thanks for reading and commenting :)
DeleteNicely done Jyothsna, the feeling of soft grass beneath your feet is heavenly...
ReplyDeleteIndeed Reshma, that's a heavenly feeling. Glad you liked it !!
DeleteLoved your haiku. A nice ode to Mother Earth and I love the feel of bare feet on the earth. Thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in Suzy. Glad to have you here too :)
DeleteLoved your maiden attempt at haiku. Nature lays a green carpet for us.
ReplyDeleteHey Kalpana, thank you for appreciating :) :)
Deleteits an eco haiku, jyotsna. its the human steps on the carpet that spoils it. as an architect i would say that the concrete jungle spoils the carpet. may be your next haiku could be concrete jungle... while u write sitting within the jungle of files in your office.
ReplyDeleteYes, Niravbhai, agree with you.. concrete jungle in a way spoils beautiful natural carpet.. And as for the jungle of files in my office, now since you have given me the wonderful idea, I think I should be writing about it soon.. By the way, haven't seen you around in some time.. Do visit that jungle of files for some chai :)
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