Sunday, 10 November 2013

Ma, My God !!

Love limitless as sky
Sacrifices equivalent to earth       
Blessings that never dry
Tenderness no dearth
Teachings as vast as sea
Omnipresence my life like air
For us, she spreads glee
Ma, My God !!




This post is written for Trifextra Challenge # Week 93

Buddhist cosmology tells of Trāyastriśa, or the Heaven of Thirty-Three gods, which rule over the human realm.  This weekend we’re asking for exactly 33 of your own words about a god of your own devising that shares heaven with the other thirty-two gods.  Make it yours and have fun with it.

21 comments:

  1. Wow, I love this!

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  2. Lovely piece, Jyotana. I thought the line Blessings that never dry was very interesting and true.

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    1. Hello Tedstrutz, Thank you for visiting me. Glad you liked my piece :)

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    1. Hello Bjorn, welcome to this space. Thank you :)

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  4. Beautifully written. Love the imagery.

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    1. Hi Kathy.. Glad to have you back !! Thanks for appreciation :)

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  5. I also really loved the line about "blessings that never run dry." What a lovely sentiment. Now, if you could take a moment to talk to my kids... ;)

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    1. Hi Christine, welcome to my blog. Glad that you liked my words.. And yeah sure.. feel free to direct your kids to me ;) ;)

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  6. Such a sweet take on the prompt & i love the picture you added-very apt:-)

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    1. Hello, thank you for reading.. And yes, I love the picture too :)

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  7. Gotta love a god that spreads glee!

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  8. This is so beautiful. And very true too. :)

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    1. Thanks Jasmine.. I just read your take on your take on your blog for your mother.. And its beautiful.. I guess whatever we write about over mothers becomes beautiful by itself.. Mothers are just wonderful people :):)

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