‘Come
on sweetheart, she has been waiting for you since morning and look at you,
trying to turn your eyes away from her, trying to run away, I mean what are you
even thinking?’
‘I
can’t, I just can’t do it however hard she tries to beckon me with that sexy
voice of hers. I am not going back to her because I am not falling into her
trap again and your trap again.’
‘I
am not laying any trap for you and you better get that straight in your head
that whatever I ask you to do is for your own benefit.’
‘No,
my dear stomach, right now what you are asking me to do is not for my benefit because right now you are not hungry but just plain bored so stop
growling since it’s not lunch time yet and I am not going to eat that cookie
lying in the drawer however hard you try to persuade me.’
Written
for Five Sentence Fiction - Hunger
hahah! the ending was too gud :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :)
DeleteThis was so cute :D
ReplyDeleteThank you Shailaja :)
DeleteNow this is something ... loved the twist :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Amrit :)
DeleteA nice misleading story
ReplyDeleteGlad I could create that effect ;)
DeleteNot where I thought this story was going -- very nice! :D
ReplyDeleteThat was the plan ;)
DeleteLOL - I loved this, and I admire her control. I'm afraid that cookie would have been long gone if it were me, and there would have been no need for the tempting conversation either. I love your witty interpretation of the prompt.
ReplyDeleteGod bless you,
Cheryl
:D Thank you Cheryl. Glad you liked it :)
DeleteStory of my life. I did not expect this though.
ReplyDeleteAwesome :D
Story of 'our' life, Red !! Thanks babes :)
DeleteLol , my stomach also demanding something,nice read
ReplyDeleteWinner
Lol.. well, how about having that cookie ;)
DeleteShe didn't want to eat the cookie, I'd love to have one anytime.
ReplyDeleteOh, we would all love to have it :) :)
Delete:) sweet.
ReplyDeleteThank you Janaki :)
DeleteHa! Yes, we've all been there.....
ReplyDeleteOh yes !!
DeleteLol I did not see it going that way :D
ReplyDeleteGood one :)
Thanks Anmol :)
DeleteGood one! I think many can relate here! My 5SF Story: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteThank you :) Off to read yours !!
DeleteLove this! The stomach growl and whatta finish..hehe food triumph over love:)
ReplyDeleteLol .. Glad you love this Vishal :)
DeleteAwesome cute. But, I am quite sure the only way to end the conversation is to get the cookie :D
ReplyDeleteLol.. That's one awesome way to end the conversation ;) :P
DeleteLol!
ReplyDeleteTwist in tale there...
Interesting! :)
Thanks !!
DeleteHaha! Good luck resisting the cookie!
ReplyDeleteAh, I so need the good luck ;)
Deletelol good one.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks babes :)
DeleteHello there. Just stopping by to congratulate you on completing the A-Z Challenge! Wishing you all the best. Visiting from the Road Trip.
ReplyDeleteEntrepreneurial Goddess
Thank you so much :)
DeleteLovely ending, Jyotsna. Quite unexpected.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sid :)
DeleteHa haha :D Sweet and funny poem Jyotsna... :) Very well written :) TC! Keep smiling :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sindhu :)
DeleteHehe loved this one :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked this divsi :)
DeleteAshwini, this is what happens for most of us ;)
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