Friday, 3 October 2014

Five Sentence Fiction - Hunger

‘Come on sweetheart, she has been waiting for you since morning and look at you, trying to turn your eyes away from her, trying to run away, I mean what are you even thinking?’

‘I can’t, I just can’t do it however hard she tries to beckon me with that sexy voice of hers. I am not going back to her because I am not falling into her trap again and your trap again.’

‘I am not laying any trap for you and you better get that straight in your head that whatever I ask you to do is for your own benefit.’

‘No, my dear stomach, right now what you are asking me to do is not for my benefit because right now you are not hungry but just plain bored so stop growling since it’s not lunch time yet and I am not going to eat that cookie lying in the drawer however hard you try to persuade me.’



Written for Five Sentence Fiction - Hunger

47 comments:

  1. hahah! the ending was too gud :D

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  2. Now this is something ... loved the twist :-)

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  3. Not where I thought this story was going -- very nice! :D

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  4. LOL - I loved this, and I admire her control. I'm afraid that cookie would have been long gone if it were me, and there would have been no need for the tempting conversation either. I love your witty interpretation of the prompt.

    God bless you,
    Cheryl

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    1. :D Thank you Cheryl. Glad you liked it :)

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  5. Story of my life. I did not expect this though.
    Awesome :D

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    1. Story of 'our' life, Red !! Thanks babes :)

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  6. Lol , my stomach also demanding something,nice read

    Winner

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    1. Lol.. well, how about having that cookie ;)

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  7. She didn't want to eat the cookie, I'd love to have one anytime.

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    1. Oh, we would all love to have it :) :)

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  8. Ha! Yes, we've all been there.....

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  9. Lol I did not see it going that way :D
    Good one :)

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  10. Good one! I think many can relate here! My 5SF Story: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com

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  11. Love this! The stomach growl and whatta finish..hehe food triumph over love:)

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  12. Awesome cute. But, I am quite sure the only way to end the conversation is to get the cookie :D

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    1. Lol.. That's one awesome way to end the conversation ;) :P

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  13. Lol!
    Twist in tale there...
    Interesting! :)

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  14. Haha! Good luck resisting the cookie!

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  15. Hello there. Just stopping by to congratulate you on completing the A-Z Challenge! Wishing you all the best. Visiting from the Road Trip.

    Entrepreneurial Goddess

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  16. Haha. Good one. For ardent Foodies like me, this is what happens all the time :-D

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    1. Ashwini, this is what happens for most of us ;)

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  17. Lovely ending, Jyotsna. Quite unexpected.

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  18. Ha haha :D Sweet and funny poem Jyotsna... :) Very well written :) TC! Keep smiling :)

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