how
and why do
shadows of past ghosts
follow though we have dissolved
ages
ago in murky waters
of flaring egos
our ashes
rot
Written for B&P Shadorma and Beyond –The Oddquain
Oddquain Butterfly – a nine-line stanza
with 1-3-5-7-1-7-5-3-1 syllables
we have dissolved
ReplyDeleteages
ago in murky waters
of flaring egos .................. wonderful!
Thank you :)
DeleteJyotsna, this form of poetry is vey interesting. The poem is written very well.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ma'am :)
DeleteA very powerful but sad write ...
ReplyDeleteghosts
leftovers
of what could have been
drawn from experience - long
past
Bastet
Wow.
Deletesometimes the shadows of our ego does not allow us to "resolve" the murkyness that exists between us
ReplyDelete................welcome back, jyotsna
Totally agree to you here. Thank you so much :)
DeleteThat is life i guess.. and we got to live with all that .. its what we do that is more important
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Sometimes yes that's the only option we have
DeleteAgreed. Thank you for visiting.
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