Saturday, 25 October 2014

His Smile

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Still remember the day
I first noticed
His Smile
From lips to eyes
Reached in no time
It also beckoned mine

Warm, compassionate
He wore
His Smile
Dripped with positivity
Made our meet
Worthwhile

After mild rain
Like rainbows one could see
His Smile
Could make air around
Seem pleasant
For a little while


Melting Chocolate
On a warm winter morning
His smile
Like a walk in clouds
Sadness it could drive away
Atleast a mile

Always aware he's been
Of the mystic spell in
His smile
Gripping hearts
Many, till date
It beguiled

Enticed I am
Await to see everytime
His Disarming Smile
Hope it stays afloat forever
Sprinkling happiness
In his innate style! 



36 comments:

  1. That is my question too! ;)

    Lovely poem and a genuine smile can steal hearts very easily!

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    1. Yep, beautiful smile can do that for sure ;)

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  2. The smile is very powerful indeed as your lines suggest.

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  3. The spoke a lot but concealed some! A lovely poem indeed.

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  4. what a smiling post.......nice writing........feel better to read this post.......
    http://www.alltopsecret.com/

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    1. Thank you so much. Off to read the one you suggested :)

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    1. I would say that its filled with admiration :)

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  6. I would love to have a smile like that

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    1. Ahaaa.. Who wouldn't want to have that?

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  7. Fascinating what a smile can do.. dangerous too sometimes... hope he can handle his power.

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  8. That is some smile! May it keep shining your way!

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  9. O, to wear such a smile! Could it be, from another perspective, a curse?

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    1. Ahaan.. a curse ?? An interesting perspective to be thought. Thanks for visiting Susan :)

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    1. I would call it as admiration, Anmol :)

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  11. Amazing power in this kind of smile! Loved the alliteration in your poem. x

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    1. Yes, absolute power. Thank you for noticing the alliteration :)

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  12. The power of smile :) mast! (ohk, thanks to the above comment I am reading it again now for alliteration)

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  13. This is such a beautiful poem touching the heart, Jyotsna:)

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  14. This reminded me of somebody whose smile I adore! :)

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    1. Ahaan.. Glad this reminded you of somebody ;)

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