But I do, every time
I breathe
I don’t know if you
ever think of me
But I do, every
moment I am awake and even in my sleep
I don’t know if my
pictures are still with you or you have kept them at bay
But I hold yours every
single day
I don’t know if my
gifts still you see
But I do, all the
days of every week
I don’t know if
without me, your life is ever a labyrinth
But mine becomes one,
every single month
I don’t know if you
would still call me someone dear
But I would, this and
every upcoming year
I don’t know if you
still love me
But I do with every
ounce of life inside me
I don’t know if you
would ever be back
But I shall wait for
you till infinity !!
Sigh....made me remember that song
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Double Sigh :(
DeleteVery touching poem.....Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThanks Amrita !!
DeleteThat was beautiful.. :) :)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear <3<3
DeletePain of every broken heart! I am not that great commentator, but, all I can say that it is very well written...
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Sindhu
Tantu
The Arts & Me
Yes, pain of a broken heart Sindhu.. :( You are here everytime I write and that's what matters to me the most.. Lots of love <3<3
DeleteTouching lines.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gaurab :)
DeletePoignancy..nicely expressed..:-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna.. Glad you liked this :)
Deleteintense and beautifully expressed lines.. wish you a happy valentines day :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Meera.. Wish you a very Happy Valentines Day too.. Hope you had fun :)
Delete'Love'ly!! Such depth of thought!
ReplyDeleteReminded of a few lines I composed a while back.
http://mind-dynamism.blogspot.com/2013/07/a-poem-promise-feeling_19.html
For your reference, and hopefully, pleasure :)
Great job Jyotsna!! Keep it up!
Thank you Krutica.. Glad to have you here and that you found this 'lovely' .. Off to read yours :):)
DeleteThis post has been selected for the Spicy Saturday Picks this week. Thank You for an amazing post! Cheers! Keep Blogging :)
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DeleteNice post
ReplyDeleteThanks Chetan :)
DeleteWritten beautifully ....it touches the heart
ReplyDeleteThanks Dr. Sushree.. Glad it reached you :)
DeleteThe pain of separation is so evident and whispers loudly.
ReplyDeleteBut I shall wait for you till infinity !! this is longing. a beautiful poem Jyotsna. SS Pick.
Thanks a lot Kalpana.. You have used all the right words in your comment.. The pain of separation and longing it is. Sigh !!
DeleteVery poignant poem.!
ReplyDeleteCongrats, your poem is selected for the Spicy Saturday Picks.
Thanks a lot Ushaji.. Glad you liked this :)
DeleteHi Jyotsna,writing is something done intentionally,But with poem,position is different,it is a natural flow from heart like a waterfall.Poem can not be planned.In present poem,the hidden pain has come out wrapping me! I wish i had not pained any one!
ReplyDeleteWhat an apt description of writing a poem you have given Vijay.. What better compliment can you give a writer than by saying that the message she wanted to convey reached the reader.. !! Thank you for that :)
DeleteOh Jyotsna,i am silent now, it may convey more.
DeleteSome deep sighs.....as I read this .....Good work....keep writing.
ReplyDeleteLuv ..Vaishali - www.vaishu-soulcurry.blogspot.com
Thank you Vaishali. Welcome to my space. Lots of love back :)
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