Wednesday, 12 February 2014

I Don't Know

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I don’t know if you ever miss me
But I do, every time I breathe

I don’t know if you ever think of me
But I do, every moment I am awake and even in my sleep

I don’t know if my pictures are still with you or you have kept them at bay
But I hold yours every single day

I don’t know if my gifts still you see
But I do, all the days of every week

I don’t know if without me, your life is ever a labyrinth
But mine becomes one, every single month

I don’t know if you would still call me someone dear
But I would, this and every upcoming year

I don’t know if you still love me
But I do with every ounce of life inside me

I don’t know if you would ever be back                                   
But I shall wait for you till infinity !!

32 comments:

  1. Sigh....made me remember that song
    "Whisky Lullaby"

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  2. Very touching poem.....Keep it up!

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  3. Pain of every broken heart! I am not that great commentator, but, all I can say that it is very well written...

    Regards,
    Sindhu
    Tantu
    The Arts & Me

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    1. Yes, pain of a broken heart Sindhu.. :( You are here everytime I write and that's what matters to me the most.. Lots of love <3<3

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    1. Thanks Maniparna.. Glad you liked this :)

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  5. intense and beautifully expressed lines.. wish you a happy valentines day :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Meera.. Wish you a very Happy Valentines Day too.. Hope you had fun :)

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  6. 'Love'ly!! Such depth of thought!
    Reminded of a few lines I composed a while back.
    http://mind-dynamism.blogspot.com/2013/07/a-poem-promise-feeling_19.html
    For your reference, and hopefully, pleasure :)

    Great job Jyotsna!! Keep it up!

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    1. Thank you Krutica.. Glad to have you here and that you found this 'lovely' .. Off to read yours :):)

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  7. This post has been selected for the Spicy Saturday Picks this week. Thank You for an amazing post! Cheers! Keep Blogging :)

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  8. Written beautifully ....it touches the heart

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    1. Thanks Dr. Sushree.. Glad it reached you :)

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  9. The pain of separation is so evident and whispers loudly.

    But I shall wait for you till infinity !! this is longing. a beautiful poem Jyotsna. SS Pick.

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    1. Thanks a lot Kalpana.. You have used all the right words in your comment.. The pain of separation and longing it is. Sigh !!

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  10. Very poignant poem.!
    Congrats, your poem is selected for the Spicy Saturday Picks.

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    1. Thanks a lot Ushaji.. Glad you liked this :)

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  11. Hi Jyotsna,writing is something done intentionally,But with poem,position is different,it is a natural flow from heart like a waterfall.Poem can not be planned.In present poem,the hidden pain has come out wrapping me! I wish i had not pained any one!

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    1. What an apt description of writing a poem you have given Vijay.. What better compliment can you give a writer than by saying that the message she wanted to convey reached the reader.. !! Thank you for that :)

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    2. Oh Jyotsna,i am silent now, it may convey more.

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  12. Some deep sighs.....as I read this .....Good work....keep writing.

    Luv ..Vaishali - www.vaishu-soulcurry.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you Vaishali. Welcome to my space. Lots of love back :)

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