That’s
what friends are for! To lift you up when you are feeling down. So while I
sulked on Facebook about not having my laptop with me during the weekend to
write, Amrit Sinha (www.livinglifegreenspeck.blogspot.in)
came to my rescue. He gave an idea. And then, we rhymed. Without any reason. On
a chat. The result is below. Have a look! A stanza each written by both of us. And
being my first ever duet poem, this one is sure going down the memory lane. We
had fun crafting this up. Hope you have fun reading it too. And Amrit - thank
you, this sure made me smile J
Oh
laptop, oh laptop,
I
miss you like hell,
When
will you, when will you
Again
get well?
My
laptop, dear laptop
Why
did you go away?
Don’t
you know oh dear
That
being with you makes my day!
That
hour when you arrived,
You
gifted me with smiles,
We
promised to be together,
In
journey across miles
Ah,
the caress and the warmth
When
I swiftly glide along the keys
How
badly, how badly
Those
silent tickles I now miss
The
games that we played
All
day long
Movies
we watched
And
all my favourite songs
Writing
the poems and posts
On
those lonesome nights
The
creativity inside me
Kissed
greater heights
And
then came the darkness
Flooding
the dawn
My
passion screamed tears
My
heart thus mourned
I
crave to write, to touch
The
desire to see you again
Pouring
thoughts and my world
‘Cause
that’s what can keep me sane
For
you, I’ll wait
My
love all day
Come
back to me
Just
find a quicker way
I cant believe it was written by 2 people :).. Nice..
ReplyDeleteHope you get your laptop soon.. (or did you already get it?? )
Trust me, its written by two people !! And yes, I got my laptop today. Posting from it. YAY !! :):)
DeleteYayyy ... so glad we did this :D
ReplyDeleteHi5 to this effort :) :)
DeleteHi6,7,8 :p
DeleteHehehe that's indeed a fun poem :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajlakshmi :)
DeleteLol this was fun to read, reminded me of Oh captain my captain, well its similar anyway :D:D
ReplyDeleteHehe.. Oh Captain, my captain !!! :D :D
DeleteAwwww such a cute poem!!! Loved reading every word! Looks like you were indeed craving more for the laptop than for food :D
ReplyDeleteHaha.. Thanks Gauri for finding this 'cute'. And yes, I was craving for my laptop like hell ;)
DeleteSo sweet! That's why you laptop needed to go to repair! Finally, all is well :)
ReplyDeleteHehe.. Thanks Sindhu... Yes, all is well now.. ;)
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