Unmade as always
But
hey, I like it that ways
Creases
forming intricate designs
This
bed has seen all my mood signs
Cried
I have sunken on the pillows
When
life was vague and nothing but hollow
Privy
to all sweet nothings
Along
with sweethearts, it listened to talks so mushy
Sitting
in my sweat pants
Writing
poetry and the rants
While
readying for the hangouts
On
it, all the dresses have been laid out
Jumped
on it in excitement
Punched
it hard in resentment
Pizza
crumbs on it be found
And
yes, my phone must also be around
Cuddled
on it with soft toys
Under
warm blankets, oh what joys!
Lazed
around for hours at a stretch
Lost
in thoughts sitting on its edge
Me
and my world it has held
Oh
yes, I just love my unmade bed!
This
one is written for Mag # 212
Messy, unmade and delightful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen :)
DeleteA delightful list type poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the 'delightful' Cait :)
DeleteThere's beauty and solace in mess, as long as the mess is your bed :D lovely take, dear !
ReplyDeleteHaha.. so well said Sreeja, as long it is only on the bed ;) Glad you liked this :)
DeleteArrey waah ... this is so good ... a story out of an unmade bed ... too creative you are.
ReplyDeleteY cant I think like you? ***jealousy***
Thanks Amrit for 'too creative you are' and your 'jealousy'.. And I also know that you are being kind as always :P
DeleteGreat use of the neglected rhyming couplets. Nice write.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog Trellissimo.. Thanks a lot :)
DeleteOops - try again, Jinksy! LOL
ReplyDeleteYou managed to find some good points despite all the mess around this bed! :)
Haha.. thankfully the mess on the bed didn't mess my head ;)
Deletea positive take on a messy unmade bed!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathe :)
DeleteYAY! ...Here's to mess and disarray! Great poem!
ReplyDeleteHehe.. Yay.. thankfully I have a companion to yay for the mess ;)
DeleteNicely done...thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThanks Wayne :)
DeleteWell done. I love my bed - unmade or not.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I love it too :)
Deletea messy bed is sometimes all I need :D wonderful write :D
ReplyDeleteYes, so true.. Thanks Raj :)
DeleteI just freak out when I see something which is not arranged. I organize everything in my life. Even my books and folders in my shelf are organized in categories. Though I don't relate to it but I know it will definitely be very popular among the youth. Very well written. :) :D
ReplyDeleteOh, you are a rare kind Gaurab. I am a complete opposite. Dont know about popular but yes, I know a lot of people would see their unmade beds and rooms here ;) Thanks for reading :)
DeleteHow well have you described ! so many little elements joint to form this ! it was a pleasant read ! Unmade are for creative heads which suits a writer ! :)
ReplyDeleteThank your noticing the elements. Thanks for visiting :)
DeleteSuch a small thing described so beautifully!!! Awesome
ReplyDeleteI love mine too...
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