Tuesday, 25 March 2014

Unmade as always


Unmade as always
But hey, I like it that ways
Creases forming intricate designs
This bed has seen all my mood signs
Cried I have sunken on the pillows
When life was vague and nothing but hollow
Privy to all sweet nothings
Along with sweethearts, it listened to talks so mushy
Sitting in my sweat pants
Writing poetry and the rants
While readying for the hangouts
On it, all the dresses have been laid out
Jumped on it in excitement
Punched it hard in resentment
Pizza crumbs on it be found
And yes, my phone must also be around
Cuddled on it with soft toys
Under warm blankets, oh what joys!
Lazed around for hours at a stretch
Lost in thoughts sitting on its edge
Me and my world it has held
Oh yes, I just love my unmade bed!




This one is written for Mag # 212

30 comments:

  1. Messy, unmade and delightful!

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    1. Thank you for the 'delightful' Cait :)

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  3. There's beauty and solace in mess, as long as the mess is your bed :D lovely take, dear !

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    1. Haha.. so well said Sreeja, as long it is only on the bed ;) Glad you liked this :)

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  4. Arrey waah ... this is so good ... a story out of an unmade bed ... too creative you are.

    Y cant I think like you? ***jealousy***

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    1. Thanks Amrit for 'too creative you are' and your 'jealousy'.. And I also know that you are being kind as always :P

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  5. Great use of the neglected rhyming couplets. Nice write.

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    1. Welcome to my blog Trellissimo.. Thanks a lot :)

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  6. Oops - try again, Jinksy! LOL

    You managed to find some good points despite all the mess around this bed! :)

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    1. Haha.. thankfully the mess on the bed didn't mess my head ;)

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  7. a positive take on a messy unmade bed!

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  8. YAY! ...Here's to mess and disarray! Great poem!

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    1. Hehe.. Yay.. thankfully I have a companion to yay for the mess ;)

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  9. Nicely done...thanks for sharing

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  10. Well done. I love my bed - unmade or not.
    Anna :o]

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  11. a messy bed is sometimes all I need :D wonderful write :D

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  12. I just freak out when I see something which is not arranged. I organize everything in my life. Even my books and folders in my shelf are organized in categories. Though I don't relate to it but I know it will definitely be very popular among the youth. Very well written. :) :D

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    1. Oh, you are a rare kind Gaurab. I am a complete opposite. Dont know about popular but yes, I know a lot of people would see their unmade beds and rooms here ;) Thanks for reading :)

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  13. How well have you described ! so many little elements joint to form this ! it was a pleasant read ! Unmade are for creative heads which suits a writer ! :)

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    1. Thank your noticing the elements. Thanks for visiting :)

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  14. Such a small thing described so beautifully!!! Awesome

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