Tuesday, 25 March 2014

Sand : Haiku

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Etched in sand                                                         
Temporary it is
May ‘we’ sustain forever though

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Like castles, we built of sand
Wish life could be molded
Like we wanted


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You never realize
How quick they grow
And like sand, time slips away






38 comments:

  1. What beautiful poems; all of them touch the heart by being so personal. Your first haiku is like mine but, you did me two better so, good for you. I shall learn from your work and do better in the future. It is how we grow. :)

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    1. Hey Tom. Just visited you. Yes, we were on the same page with my first one here.. You are being kind with your words. But yes, so rightly said, that's how we grow.. !! Lovely to have you here :)

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  2. Nice take!!Loved the last one the most.

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  3. The last one was awesome! :)

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  4. I loved all of them...
    Lovely... Lovely!

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  5. Sand, life and time, always so synonymous ... loved your deep insights :-)

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  6. you are a philosopher,Jyotsna ! keep the wheel rolling !

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    1. Haha... Glad you liked them Milan :) I hope the wheel keeps rolling ;)

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  7. the touch of emptiness grips the heart....specially the last one...beautifully written lines...

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  8. Two lovely wishes and a wise third one. Loved each of your trio Jyotsna.

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    1. Thanks Reshma :) So glad you loved them !!

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  9. Loved all 3... so profound and Amen to the first two :)

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  10. I loved them all.. specially the second one! Indeed,time slips away..

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    1. Thank you Payal.. Yes, time does slip way :)

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  11. Hi Jyotsna,
    Good to meet yet another Indian blogger at A to Z pages
    Well versed Haiku, will come again to read more.
    Nice to be here, I am here via A to Z blog page,
    Good to know that you registered for this years challenge.
    A Warm Welcome Abroad.
    Hey, I just noticed that you haven't embedded a to z logo at your sidebar. kindly do it.
    Have a happy blogging time ahead.
    Keep informed.
    Best Regards
    Philip of philipscom http://www.pvariel.com

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    1. Hey Philip, nice to meet you too.. And thanks for visiting. So glad to have you here and thank you for the warm welcome. I just added the badge.. Hope to see you around. Happy blogging to you too :):)

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  12. I like them all! Sand is ever shifting isn't it?

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  13. It is hard to tell which one is better.All of them are lovely.

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  14. Beautiful set indeed!! I can't decide which one is my favourite!:)

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    1. Thanks a lot Tarang.. How sweet of you :)

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