when they finally met
vodka swam in air
and friendship was
poured in
glass after
glass
he the regular
she was a newbie
and nothingness breathed in
with a feeling
of getting drowned
in music
and intoxication too
wrapped in the
blanket
of comfort zone
that grew cozier
everyday
when their
inhibitions
went on a brief
holiday
words flew
or maybe not
when stillness
felt like a warm
embrace
hours slipped by
in a matter of
minutes
and they wished
the night would stop by
with an unending
supply
of alchohol and music
and nothingness to
breathe in
and breathe out
because what else
would they call?
heaven
if it was not this !
That is a great poem.I smiled at the line 'when their inhibitions,went on a brief holiday'
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DeleteManali Trance
ReplyDeleteexactly!!!
DeleteKind of ;)
DeleteHahaha I agree!
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DeleteI guess I should now get used to Vodka.
ReplyDeletePhew, one of many sacrifices or should I say perks?
Sacrifices or Perks??? Tough choice, haan? :P :P
Deletehaha Vodka always bond hearts and friendship. A beautiful tale of romance where alcohol wafts through:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vishal :)
DeleteThat's really really lovely! For some it's wine or coffee. Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteYep.. we all have our addictions Saru. Thank you :)
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DeleteSo many wonderful lines, starting with "friendship was poured in…" Really enjoyed this imaginative poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you Margaret. Glad you liked it :)
Deletegosh, i was reading this just waiting for something bad to happen with all that booze flowing. maybe not?
ReplyDeleteWell.. sometimes, life does treat you well. Isn't it? ;)
DeleteLovely flow to the poem!
ReplyDeleteniceee! I love Absolut Vodka ads! Nice poem with great flow!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita. Glad you liked the flow !!
DeleteOh.. I could agree.. But it's a habit that's hard to break.,. Maybe there are better ways?
ReplyDeleteWell.. I need to find better ways then Bjorn ;)
DeleteAlcohol may seem like heaven for a short time, but overindulgence can turn the tide.
ReplyDeleteAgree to that !!
Delete"when stillness felt like a warm embrace"........lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherry :)
DeleteEach of us do have our own heaven...mine has been chocolate but long ago it was vodka....love the lines, "because what else would they call?
ReplyDeleteheaven
if it was not this !'
Chocolate is another heaven Donna. Thank you for dropping by :)
Deletehahaha you're a character :-)
ReplyDeleteZQ
I hope I am an interesting one ;)
DeleteBut how do you feel in the morning?
ReplyDeleteWell... Let's not go there :P
DeleteLoved this! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteGreat definition of how we feel in the moment.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it :)
DeleteIndeed !!
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ReplyDeleteLoved this. They say alcohol is a social lubricant. Champagne works for me:)
ReplyDeleteI felt those breaths!
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