Monday 24 November 2014

Heaven !!

when they finally met
vodka swam in air
and friendship was poured in
glass after glass 
he the regular
she was a newbie
and nothingness breathed in
with a feeling
of getting drowned
in music
and intoxication too
wrapped in the blanket
of comfort zone
that grew cozier everyday
when their inhibitions
went on a brief holiday
words flew
or maybe not
when stillness
felt like a warm embrace
hours slipped by
in a matter of minutes
and they wished
the night would stop by 
with an unending supply
of alchohol and music
and nothingness to breathe in
and breathe out
because what else would they call?
heaven
if it was not this !  


42 comments:

  1. That is a great poem.I smiled at the line 'when their inhibitions,went on a brief holiday'

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  2. I guess I should now get used to Vodka.
    Phew, one of many sacrifices or should I say perks?

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    1. Sacrifices or Perks??? Tough choice, haan? :P :P

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  3. haha Vodka always bond hearts and friendship. A beautiful tale of romance where alcohol wafts through:)

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  4. That's really really lovely! For some it's wine or coffee. Beautiful poem!

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    1. Yep.. we all have our addictions Saru. Thank you :)

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  6. So many wonderful lines, starting with "friendship was poured in…" Really enjoyed this imaginative poem.

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  7. gosh, i was reading this just waiting for something bad to happen with all that booze flowing. maybe not?

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    1. Well.. sometimes, life does treat you well. Isn't it? ;)

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  8. niceee! I love Absolut Vodka ads! Nice poem with great flow!

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  9. Oh.. I could agree.. But it's a habit that's hard to break.,. Maybe there are better ways?

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    1. Well.. I need to find better ways then Bjorn ;)

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  10. Alcohol may seem like heaven for a short time, but overindulgence can turn the tide.

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  11. "when stillness felt like a warm embrace"........lovely.

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  12. Each of us do have our own heaven...mine has been chocolate but long ago it was vodka....love the lines, "because what else would they call?
    heaven
    if it was not this !'

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    1. Chocolate is another heaven Donna. Thank you for dropping by :)

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  13. hahaha you're a character :-)
    ZQ

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  14. But how do you feel in the morning?

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  15. Great definition of how we feel in the moment.

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  16. Loved this. They say alcohol is a social lubricant. Champagne works for me:)

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