Monday, 22 June 2015

Chemistry

The smiles, the smoke
The flowing talks
When judgement wasn’t being served
And silence too meant a lot

Boundaries were being bent
Frustrations found a vent
Where love wasn’t on the cards
But the chemistry to go unnoticed
It seemed hard

When the need to name
And the urge to confine
What they shared as a relation
Seemed vain and futile



 Written for Magpie Tales # 275

18 comments:

  1. Beautifully put. And years ago, I could relate to something like this.

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    1. Thanks Soumya. I love it when you say you connect with my words :)

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  2. Nice take on the prompt

    http://postweddingdiaries.blogspot.in/2015/06/mag-275-couple-talk.html

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    1. Thank you. And welcome to my space :)

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  3. Boundaries were being bent. So much said in a few words.

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  4. "When judgment wasn't being served"---wow, that says a lot!

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  5. Enjoyed this one immensely. I think it captured the essence of the prompt nicely.

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    1. Thank you Helena. Glad you liked it :)

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  6. Wow..!! That is such a wonderful write-up Jyotsna..
    You should write more often gal!

    Cheers

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    1. Glad you liked this one Geetika. Your words motivate me to pick up the pen more often. Thank you :)

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  7. Ah! Thats so beautiful and cute :)

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