The smiles, the smoke
The flowing talks
When judgement wasn’t
being served
And silence too meant
a lot
Boundaries were being
bent
Frustrations found a
vent
Where love wasn’t on
the cards
But the chemistry to
go unnoticed
It seemed hard
When the need to name
And the urge to
confine
What they shared as a
relation
Seemed vain and
futile
Written for Magpie Tales # 275
Beautifully put. And years ago, I could relate to something like this.
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DeleteNice take on the prompt
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Thank you. And welcome to my space :)
DeleteBoundaries were being bent. So much said in a few words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kalpana Ma'm :)
Delete"When judgment wasn't being served"---wow, that says a lot!
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DeleteEnjoyed this one immensely. I think it captured the essence of the prompt nicely.
ReplyDeleteThank you Helena. Glad you liked it :)
DeleteWow..!! That is such a wonderful write-up Jyotsna..
ReplyDeleteYou should write more often gal!
Cheers
Glad you liked this one Geetika. Your words motivate me to pick up the pen more often. Thank you :)
DeleteHot hot chemistry...
ReplyDeleteThanks Tess :)
DeleteLoved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreesha :)
DeleteAh! Thats so beautiful and cute :)
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