Wednesday, 30 April 2014

Zephyr of Love : 55 words

a mundane existence
life dragged away
uncomplicated
it was for sure
unaware
caught I was
amidst
zephyr of your love
slowly
sweeping away the
blues
colouring my existence
zephyr then
whirlwind now
whirlwind of happiness
wafting away
the discomforts
drunk on your being
high on you
I am floating
still
in your
zephyr of love



This post is written as a part of April A to Z Challenge 2014 under Non-Themed category. I am doing two posts for this Challenge and Themed posts can be found here.


48 comments:

  1. That is beautiful and a bit romantic! Congratulations on completing the challenge! ♥

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    1. Thanks a lot Kathy. Congratulations to you too on completing the challenge :)

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  2. Intoxicating poem, Jyotsna. Congrats champs:)

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    1. Ah, thanks Vishal. Your 'intoxicating' makes me smile :) And Congrats to you too dear :)

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    1. Thanks Naba and Congrats to you too :)

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  4. Congrats on finishing up the challenge :) Will catch up on all your posts soon :) Been fun! Loved the 55-er

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    1. Congratulations to you too Shailaja :) Yeah, its been total fun. Loved reading yours too!!

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  5. Congratulations for completing the challenge. Beautiful poem, Jyotsna!

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    1. Thanks Beloo. Glad you liked this. And congratulations to you too dear :)

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  6. Aaaahhh - wonderful poem - was dreamy caught up in your words... Great finish of a great challenge! Congrats:-)

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    1. Aww.. thanks Eli.. Congrats to you too for the completion :)

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  7. That's beautiful! :)

    Thank you for dropping by my blog with such lovely comments. Made me really happy!

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    1. Thanks dear. Glad to have visited and glad to have you here too :)

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  8. Congrats on ending the challenge with beautiful words.
    Thanks for visiting my blog and reading some of the stories. I would appreciate it if you would take a few moments to vote for your favorite ones.
    http://peeekaaabooo.blogspot.com/2014/04/a-z-challenge-wrap-up.html

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    1. Congrats to you too Madhu. Coming by on yours soon :)

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  9. Zephyr of love ... wow ... just loved the way you crafted the words here :-)

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  10. Zephyr of love to finish the challenge... Congrats on completing the challenge successfully..

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  11. very beautiful weave.. :)
    congrats for successfully completing the challenge :D

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  12. I loved the poem, Jyotsna. Congrats on the completion of the challenge.

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    1. Thanks a lot Usha Ma'am. And congratulations to you too for completing the challenge :)

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  13. Your posts make me think "Man , Jyotsna oozes creativity , and that too so well penned stuffs"...
    Beautiful Zephyr! :)

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    1. Oh my, Nikhil.. you are always kind with words.. This one makes me smile a little more.. Thanks a lot dear :)

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  14. Your poems touch my heart . Beautifully penned down each one of them :) Congrats on completing the challenge :)

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    1. Aww... Thanks a lot Sushree.. So happy that you like what I write.. Congratulations to you too dear :)

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  15. Perfect right after Beltane. To be drunk on someone else. Beautiful.

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  16. Aah, Poetess ! Superb, this one !
    Congrats on finishing the challenge ! We did it, yaay ! Hugsss !

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    1. Thanks a lot Sreeja. Congratulations to you too dear.. Yesss.. we did it.. Lots of love and hugs back :):):)

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  17. Serene is the zephyr
    Gentle its hold
    Known only to the held
    Others it need be told

    Amazing poetry Jyotsna. You write very well. Keep it splendid always.

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    1. That was beautiful Anupam. Thanks. You write amazing too :)

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  18. Lovely words, Jyotsna! Short & sweet :)

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  19. That's a powerful phrase 'Zephyr of love' and you taught me a new word today. So :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Ritesh. Glad to have you here :)

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