a
mundane existence
life
dragged away
uncomplicated
it
was for sure
unaware
caught
I was
amidst
zephyr
of your love
slowly
sweeping
away the
blues
colouring
my existence
zephyr
then
whirlwind
now
whirlwind
of happiness
wafting
away
the
discomforts
drunk on your being
high
on you
I
am floating
still
in
your
zephyr
of love
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post is written as a part of April A to Z Challenge 2014 under Non-Themed category.
I am doing two posts for this Challenge and Themed posts can be found here.
That is beautiful and a bit romantic! Congratulations on completing the challenge! ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Kathy. Congratulations to you too on completing the challenge :)
DeleteIntoxicating poem, Jyotsna. Congrats champs:)
ReplyDeleteAh, thanks Vishal. Your 'intoxicating' makes me smile :) And Congrats to you too dear :)
DeleteSo beautiful, these lines! Congrats!
ReplyDeleteZ for Zen-Random Thoughts Naba
Thanks Naba and Congrats to you too :)
DeleteCongrats on finishing up the challenge :) Will catch up on all your posts soon :) Been fun! Loved the 55-er
ReplyDeleteCongratulations to you too Shailaja :) Yeah, its been total fun. Loved reading yours too!!
DeleteCongratulations for completing the challenge. Beautiful poem, Jyotsna!
ReplyDeleteThanks Beloo. Glad you liked this. And congratulations to you too dear :)
DeleteAaaahhh - wonderful poem - was dreamy caught up in your words... Great finish of a great challenge! Congrats:-)
ReplyDeleteAww.. thanks Eli.. Congrats to you too for the completion :)
DeleteThat's beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for dropping by my blog with such lovely comments. Made me really happy!
Thanks dear. Glad to have visited and glad to have you here too :)
Deletesuch beautiful lines :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankur :)
DeleteCongrats on ending the challenge with beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog and reading some of the stories. I would appreciate it if you would take a few moments to vote for your favorite ones.
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Congrats to you too Madhu. Coming by on yours soon :)
DeleteZephyr of love ... wow ... just loved the way you crafted the words here :-)
ReplyDeleteZephyr of love to finish the challenge... Congrats on completing the challenge successfully..
ReplyDeletevery beautiful weave.. :)
ReplyDeletecongrats for successfully completing the challenge :D
I loved the poem, Jyotsna. Congrats on the completion of the challenge.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Usha Ma'am. And congratulations to you too for completing the challenge :)
DeleteYour posts make me think "Man , Jyotsna oozes creativity , and that too so well penned stuffs"...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Zephyr! :)
Oh my, Nikhil.. you are always kind with words.. This one makes me smile a little more.. Thanks a lot dear :)
DeleteYour poems touch my heart . Beautifully penned down each one of them :) Congrats on completing the challenge :)
ReplyDeleteAww... Thanks a lot Sushree.. So happy that you like what I write.. Congratulations to you too dear :)
DeletePerfect right after Beltane. To be drunk on someone else. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Magaly :)
Deletebeautifully crafted...
ReplyDeleteReally impressive.....
ReplyDeleteThanks Sharad :)
DeleteAah, Poetess ! Superb, this one !
ReplyDeleteCongrats on finishing the challenge ! We did it, yaay ! Hugsss !
Thanks a lot Sreeja. Congratulations to you too dear.. Yesss.. we did it.. Lots of love and hugs back :):):)
DeleteSo beautiful, these lines! Congrats!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanjay :)
DeleteSerene is the zephyr
ReplyDeleteGentle its hold
Known only to the held
Others it need be told
Amazing poetry Jyotsna. You write very well. Keep it splendid always.
That was beautiful Anupam. Thanks. You write amazing too :)
DeleteLovely words, Jyotsna! Short & sweet :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Anita :)
DeleteThat's a powerful phrase 'Zephyr of love' and you taught me a new word today. So :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ritesh. Glad to have you here :)
DeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
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