Wednesday, 6 August 2014

Messed up !!


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Maddening thoughts here
Sensible contemplations there
Things to be done
Regrets of matters undone

A strong tug here
A gentle pull there
Past beguiles to lie in its arms
Future stands luring with its charms

A whisker of imagination here
A touch of reality there
Thoughts of utopian life seems so soothing
Angst against hypocritical societal norms brooding

Some stories here
Few verses there
Fictional characters waiting to be created
Unfinished drafts still to be completed

Cheerfully bright here
Shades of greys there
Finding optimism in things day to day
Lessons that need to be taught right away

A little warmth here
Lot of angst there
Smiling faces of loved ones floating
Past deceits continually exploding

Messed up here
Chaotic there
A terrible place
My mind !!


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32 comments:

  1. I totally share this state of mind right now! :(

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  2. that the beauty of A beautiful mind :D .. very nicely written :)

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  3. The mind can play havoc. Awesomely weaved:)

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    1. Yes absolutely totally correct, Vishal. Thank you dear :)

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  4. I hope your unfinished drafts get completed soon :-)

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  5. How easy life would be if we could control our mind.
    This was good!

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  6. If only .. if only ..

    but i also feel that its good we cant control cause if we did we would not be able to dream :)

    Bikram's

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    1. Well, Bikram.. dreams are amazing.. its just the conscious mind that messes up things !!

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  7. This made all the sense :)

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  8. Brilliant! I love that feeling of restlessness that you've captured !!

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  9. Lolz...
    Nice one...
    Liked the flow of words :)

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    1. Thank you Locomente :) Glad you liked this !!

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  10. Restless. Messed up. Havoc.Still handling many things. A girl's mind :P :D

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    1. Only a woman can understand this :P :P

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  11. Aah..the restlessness of the mind..can relate to this state :)

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  12. Beautifully penned. If only we could be the director and producer for all the mind games (phew! something wrong the comment posting :( )

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  13. Wonderful poem Jyotsna... When we want to be calm, it gets storms! When we want to plan, it becomes plain! So strange our mind is!

    TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. Yes, the mind never listens us. Strange it is. Thanks Sindhu :)

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  14. wowow! 'here' and 'there' and a beautiful contrasting imagery makes this poem really lovely!!

    :)

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