Monday, 20 October 2014

Release - Haiku

fighting the mundane
dragging it day after day
that’s what they call life

that’s what they call life
crib, complain and go to sleep
wake up, follow same

wake up, follow same
play the game, as we all await
day of release




Written for Haiku Horizons Prompt # 35 – RELEASE  

22 comments:

  1. Sadly ... that's how life is :-(

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  2. Nice and philosophic. Loved it!!

    Happy Diwali! :)

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  3. Haiku chain, reading after a long time.Nice !

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    1. Hey Uma, glad to have you here after a long time :)

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    1. Thank you Sankara. Glad you liked it :)

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  5. But, nobody wants (or most of them don't want) to be released :D

    Good one Jyotsna :) TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. Well.. you never know Sindhu. With mundaneness becoming a reality.. I guess release is what we await !! Thank you dear and lots of love back :)

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  6. Yes... Wake up and Follow the samle

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  7. Powerful expression on fallacy of life, Jyotsna:)

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    1. Thanks a lot Vishal. Glad you liked it :)

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