Shuddering heartbeats
Quivering lips then touch
Rivulets of Lust
* * * * * * *
Forgotten
promises
Ability
to trust chokes
Betrayal
flows
* * * * * * *
Of me you came
Joys of seeing you
grow
Rivulets of
Motherhood
* * * * * * *
Invisible
hand above
Halts
unknown dangers
Rivulets
of grace
This post is shared with Haiku Heights # 312 and the prompt is RIVULET
A beautiful collection of haiku. The first one is sensual and stunning. Nicely written!
ReplyDeleteHello Write Girl.. Welcome to my space :) Thanks for reading.. Glad you liked my words..
DeleteThere are just a few lines. But, I think it would have taken a long time to choose the perfect words! Great job!
ReplyDeleteSindhu, thank you so much.. Really appreciate your presence here. God Bless :)
DeleteA beautiful bouquet!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteGreat collection. I loved them all, but the sensuous message in the first was powerful
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Pealogic.. Lovely to have you here :)
DeleteBrilliant choice of words, I really liked the second one more than the others, though all are nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma for noticing the choice of words :)
DeleteAwesome compilation...
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the read and the feel!
Please follow the link to read mine:
http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html
Thanks for enjoying the read and the feel Satya.. Will go and check yours now :)
DeleteI really enjoyed the range you displayed with these poems. The rivulet of grace was especially nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alice for noticing the range and liking the rivulet of grace.. May the Grace rivulet always shower on you too :):)
Deletewhat is this haiku ???
ReplyDeleteHi Divyank, Haiku is a form of poetry which is written in three lines with 17 syllables..
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