Sunday, 22 December 2013

Gifts : Haiku


Myriad experiences
Emotions unnamed felt
Gift of Life
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Hidden treasures
Wrapped in beautiful colours
Smile twinkling in those eyes
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This post is shared with Haiku Heights # 314 and the prompt is GIFTS

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37 comments:

  1. Ramesh Sood22 December 2013 at 16:12

    Beautiful...both the haiku...true gifts..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/12/gift-of-winter-haiku.html#comment-form


    RS

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  2. J Cosmo Newbery22 December 2013 at 16:18

    So many miss the gift of life, looking for a life of gifts.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia22 December 2013 at 19:51

      Wow, you said it so beautifully yourself.. Such a brilliant observation :)

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  3. deeps22 December 2013 at 17:05

    season of gifts and
    wish you a happy festive season ahead

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia22 December 2013 at 19:52

      Indeed Deeps.. Wish you a great festive season too :) :)

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  4. Unknown22 December 2013 at 18:10

    Unnamed emotions, true gifts of life. Well written :)
    http://ayusheeghoshal.blogspot.in/2013/12/gift-haiku.html

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia22 December 2013 at 19:53

      Welcome to this space Ayushee.. Glad you liked these :)

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  5. Unknown22 December 2013 at 20:37

    Time for gifts galore. Awesome pair of Haiku, Jyotsna.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia22 December 2013 at 21:25

      Thanks a lot Ushaji.. Yes, its gifting season and May you have a wonderful one :)

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  6. kaykuala22 December 2013 at 21:04

    Exact capture of those upon receiving their gifts. Nicely Jyotsna!

    Hank

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia22 December 2013 at 21:27

      Thanks for the visit.. Glad to have you here :)

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  7. Anonymous22 December 2013 at 21:28

    Everyday is a gift! I loved how you had the gift of life poem and then the poem about a wrapped gift right after.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia23 December 2013 at 01:30

      Yes, everyday is a gift.. Thank you listening daisy for noticing and appreciating the thought flow behind the haiku.. Glad to have you here :)

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  8. ʞɐ22 December 2013 at 21:43

    Beautifully written.
    Ah, Gifts. :D

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia23 December 2013 at 01:31

      :) Oh yes, Ajay.. Gifts !! I see the twinkle in your eyes too ;)

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  9. Anonymous23 December 2013 at 00:28

    Each moment of life is a true gift. Lovely haiku!

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  10. rallentanda23 December 2013 at 02:10

    A twinkle in the eye is indeed a gift.

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  11. Unknown23 December 2013 at 15:25

    Nicely done :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia23 December 2013 at 22:34

      Hey Apurva, welcome to my blog. Glad you liked my words :)

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  12. Sumana Roy23 December 2013 at 18:36

    wonderfully expressed....

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  13. Nikhil23 December 2013 at 21:40

    Ahh Christmas is here & what's more better than a lovely haiku on gifts. :) :)
    Wonderfully written Jyotsna . :)

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  14. Reshma24 December 2013 at 06:14

    Wonderfully said Jyothsna, unnamed emotions felt and twinkle in the eyes just captures the essence of gifting perfectly.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia24 December 2013 at 19:17

      Thanks for reading Reshma.. Yes, they absolutely do capture the spirit of gifting :)

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  15. *Dark Angel*24 December 2013 at 17:53

    Emotions sometimes can't be named, but they can always be felt..beautiful haiku :)

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia24 December 2013 at 19:19

      Welcome to my blog Dark Angel.. Though would like to know you personally more.. Glad you liked my haiku :)

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  16. Jyotsna Bhatia24 December 2013 at 19:16

    :) :)

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  17. Sankara Jayanth S25 December 2013 at 11:32

    wonderful haiku, both of 'em! :) Merry Christmas!
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    Christmas On The 26th

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia26 December 2013 at 23:16

      Thank you Sankara.. Welcome to my blog.. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you too :)

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  18. Pealogic26 December 2013 at 20:31

    Wonderful haiku. I love the phrase "myriad experiences" and the whole concept of thd 2nd.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia26 December 2013 at 23:20

      Hey Pealogic, glad you loved my concept.. Merry Christmas :)

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  19. Anonymous26 December 2013 at 22:27

    There is no greater treasure than the gift of life. Well done.

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    1. Jyotsna Bhatia26 December 2013 at 23:23

      Indeed Alice.. Not many realize it.. Thank you :)

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