Monday, 16 December 2013

DEW : Haiku

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Braving enemies
Son, peaceful you sleep
Dew in my eyes Forever




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Eras bygone
Since I last saw you
Memories just afresh as dew



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Barefoot on you I walk
Fatigue melts away
Freshness in me induced






This post is shared with Haiku Heights # 313 and the prompt is DEW

36 comments:

  1. Dew in my eyes Forever

    a different take on the prompt.

    all the three of them are masterpieces , Jyotsna.

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    1. Oh Kalpana, I love your 'all the three of them are masterpieces' *Happy Dance* Thank you :)

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  2. Yes, the first one made me misty eyed.. very intense expression..

    RS

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    1. Yes, the first one depicts a very intense emotion Rameshji.. Thanks for reading !!

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  3. First one is awesome...
    Others are interesting too!

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    1. Thank you for your 'awesome' and 'interesting' tag Locomente :):)

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  4. Nice set. The first was both brilliant and sad.

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    1. Thank you dear.. Glad that you liked them !!

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  5. ah! reading about your 'dewy eyes' made me feel sad

    much love...

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    1. Aww.. Gillena.. Lots of love to you too :)

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  6. Three beauties........the first one is profound..

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    1. Love your 'beauties' .. Thanks for stopping by Sumana :)

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  7. The first one really moistens the eyes Jyothsna...Wonderfully crafted!!

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    1. Yes, the first one is my favourite too.. Glad you liked them Reshma !!

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  8. 3 really poignant haiku - extremely well done

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    1. Welcome to this space Judith.. Appreciate your presence here :)

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  9. My favourite line "dew in my eyes forever", brilliant

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    1. Hey Pealogic.. thanks for the 'brilliant' :):)

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    1. Thanks for dropping by Cheryl :) Glad you liked them

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  11. Very thoughtful and profound Haiku. The first one is very touching.

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  12. All three are lovely. I especially relate to to "barefoot I walk". I love the feeling of bare feet on the earth. :-)

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    1. Thank you Alice. Oh yes, bare feet on earth is a heavenly feeling :)

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  13. Wonderful, Jyotsna.
    RDB reference is touching. I remembered the movie...

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    1. Thank you so much Anita.. Glad to have you here :)

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  14. The first one is so intense ! wonderful lines !

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  15. The first and second one were wonderful!

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  16. Bravery and sacrifice of a mother well expressed.

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    1. Thank you Sangeeta. Glad you liked my words.. And welcome to my blog :)

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