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Braving
enemies
Son,
peaceful you sleep
Dew
in my eyes Forever
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Eras
bygone
Since
I last saw you
Memories
just afresh as dew
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Barefoot on you I walk
Fatigue melts away
Freshness in me induced
Fatigue melts away
Freshness in me induced
Beautiful Lines.
ReplyDeleteNicely written.
Thank you Ajay :)
DeleteDew in my eyes Forever
ReplyDeletea different take on the prompt.
all the three of them are masterpieces , Jyotsna.
Oh Kalpana, I love your 'all the three of them are masterpieces' *Happy Dance* Thank you :)
DeleteYes, the first one made me misty eyed.. very intense expression..
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Yes, the first one depicts a very intense emotion Rameshji.. Thanks for reading !!
DeleteFirst one is awesome...
ReplyDeleteOthers are interesting too!
Thank you for your 'awesome' and 'interesting' tag Locomente :):)
DeleteNice set. The first was both brilliant and sad.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear.. Glad that you liked them !!
DeleteBrilliantly done!
ReplyDeleteHappy Happy :)
Deleteah! reading about your 'dewy eyes' made me feel sad
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Aww.. Gillena.. Lots of love to you too :)
DeleteThree beauties........the first one is profound..
ReplyDeleteLove your 'beauties' .. Thanks for stopping by Sumana :)
DeleteThe first one really moistens the eyes Jyothsna...Wonderfully crafted!!
ReplyDeleteYes, the first one is my favourite too.. Glad you liked them Reshma !!
Delete3 really poignant haiku - extremely well done
ReplyDeleteWelcome to this space Judith.. Appreciate your presence here :)
DeleteMy favourite line "dew in my eyes forever", brilliant
ReplyDeleteHey Pealogic.. thanks for the 'brilliant' :):)
DeleteVery emotional haiku
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Cheryl :) Glad you liked them
DeleteVery thoughtful and profound Haiku. The first one is very touching.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ushaji :)
DeleteAll three are lovely. I especially relate to to "barefoot I walk". I love the feeling of bare feet on the earth. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Alice. Oh yes, bare feet on earth is a heavenly feeling :)
DeleteWonderful, Jyotsna.
ReplyDeleteRDB reference is touching. I remembered the movie...
Thank you so much Anita.. Glad to have you here :)
DeleteThe first one is so intense ! wonderful lines !
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna..
DeleteThe first and second one were wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you babes !!
DeleteBravery and sacrifice of a mother well expressed.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sangeeta. Glad you liked my words.. And welcome to my blog :)
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