Monday 9 December 2013

RIVULET : Haiku


Shuddering heartbeats
Quivering lips then touch
Rivulets of Lust

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Forgotten promises
Ability to trust chokes
Betrayal flows

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Of me you came
Joys of seeing you grow
Rivulets of Motherhood

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Invisible hand above
Halts unknown dangers
Rivulets of grace





This post is shared with Haiku Heights # 312 and the prompt is RIVULET









16 comments:

  1. A beautiful collection of haiku. The first one is sensual and stunning. Nicely written!

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    1. Hello Write Girl.. Welcome to my space :) Thanks for reading.. Glad you liked my words..

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  2. There are just a few lines. But, I think it would have taken a long time to choose the perfect words! Great job!

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    1. Sindhu, thank you so much.. Really appreciate your presence here. God Bless :)

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  3. Great collection. I loved them all, but the sensuous message in the first was powerful

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    1. Thank you so much Pealogic.. Lovely to have you here :)

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  4. Brilliant choice of words, I really liked the second one more than the others, though all are nicely done.

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    1. Thanks Reshma for noticing the choice of words :)

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  5. Awesome compilation...
    Enjoyed the read and the feel!

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html

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    1. Thanks for enjoying the read and the feel Satya.. Will go and check yours now :)

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  6. I really enjoyed the range you displayed with these poems. The rivulet of grace was especially nice.

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    1. Thanks Alice for noticing the range and liking the rivulet of grace.. May the Grace rivulet always shower on you too :):)

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    1. Hi Divyank, Haiku is a form of poetry which is written in three lines with 17 syllables..

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