Wednesday, 23 April 2014

Trustworthy and Torn : Haiku


Trustworthy
claims tall every time
change they shall bring for all
country, emptied of trust


Torn
one gave life
life partner other, differences amongst
torn poor me




This post is written as a part of April A to Z Challenge 2014. I am doing two posts for every alphabet. The Non-themed posts can be found here.


Also, linking the first haiku with Haiku Horizons Week 9. The prompt - ‘Empty’


30 comments:

  1. Very nice Haiku,The first one evokes a feeling of trust. Good two in one.

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    1. Thank you Usha Ma'am. Glad you liked them :)

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  2. very nice jyotsna :) for me 2nd one struck home! its indeed difficult to be torn b/w 2 ppl we love

    http://swathishenoy.blogspot.in/2014/04/t-for-thankful.html?m=1
    a-z participant

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    1. Indeed, very difficult. Thanks for stopping by :)

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  3. Good ones, both of them, Jyotsna. The first one truly depicts the sad state of our country. And being torn between 2 people you love can be really painful!

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  4. I can soooo relate to the second one.

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  5. second one is somuch relatable !

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  6. Haha the second one takes it away!

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  7. Lovely! You excel at Haikus :D

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    1. Hehe !! Thank you Soumya. You are amazing at them yourself :)

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  8. With politics ruling the mind first one takes the cake and second is apt too
    Dropping by from a to z- http://afshan-shaik.blogspot.in/
    Good luck !

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    1. Thank you Afshan :) Great to have you here!!

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  9. Lovely way to express yourself through haiku in the letter T.

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  10. "Empty of trust" is a fine line.

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    1. Thank you Alice. Glad to have you here again :)

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  11. They keep claiming, and then failing our trust....

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  12. i like the first one ! very apt with our country's situation !

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