Trustworthy
claims
tall every time
change
they shall bring for all
country,
emptied of trust
Torn
one
gave life
life
partner other, differences amongst
torn
poor me
This post is written as a part of April A to Z Challenge 2014. I am doing two posts for every alphabet. The Non-themed posts can be found here.
Also,
linking the first haiku with Haiku Horizons Week 9. The prompt - ‘Empty’
Very nice Haiku,The first one evokes a feeling of trust. Good two in one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Usha Ma'am. Glad you liked them :)
Deletevery nice jyotsna :) for me 2nd one struck home! its indeed difficult to be torn b/w 2 ppl we love
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a-z participant
Indeed, very difficult. Thanks for stopping by :)
DeleteGood ones, both of them, Jyotsna. The first one truly depicts the sad state of our country. And being torn between 2 people you love can be really painful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa :)
DeleteI can soooo relate to the second one.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the club, sweetheart !!
DeleteLove both ! :)
ReplyDeletesecond one is somuch relatable !
ReplyDeleteSigh !!
DeleteHaha the second one takes it away!
ReplyDeleteLOL ;)
DeleteLovely! You excel at Haikus :D
ReplyDeleteHehe !! Thank you Soumya. You are amazing at them yourself :)
DeleteWith politics ruling the mind first one takes the cake and second is apt too
ReplyDeleteDropping by from a to z- http://afshan-shaik.blogspot.in/
Good luck !
Thank you Afshan :) Great to have you here!!
DeleteLovely way to express yourself through haiku in the letter T.
ReplyDeleteThanks Stephanie :)
DeleteDelightful Haikus:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal :)
Delete"Empty of trust" is a fine line.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alice. Glad to have you here again :)
DeleteThey keep claiming, and then failing our trust....
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely !!
Deletei like the first one ! very apt with our country's situation !
ReplyDeleteYep. Totally !!
DeleteAs usual, rocking, Jyotsna :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sreeja :)
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