They stood near a bike outside their favourite
coffee shop. She leaned on his bike resting her huge white bag on the seat. Her
gaze was fixed on his face, while he seemed restless, not looking at her at all.
He kept on staring at a distance on the road as if counting the vehicles
passing by. Both of them hardly said anything.
A scrawny woman with a child in her hand
approached them. ‘Please give me something. I haven’t eaten since yesterday. I
need to feed him too’ – she said pointing at her child. Both of them looked at
her and then towards each other. They
remembered something though none said a word. ‘Please give me something.
Atleast buy me one wadapaav from that stall’ she pointed at the nearby
stall.
Neha opened her bag and searched for her purse. She
never did something like this before. Earlier, whenever any beggar approached
them, it was he who got generous and handed such beggars more than the beggar
would have expected. Today, she saw that he hadn’t budged. She opened her purse
and found a few notes and coins. Carefully, she plucked a hundred rupee note
from her purse and handed it to the beggar. The beggar was surprised at the
generosity. Even Shaurya looked at her differently. After all, he knew her too
well.
‘God bless you, child. May all your dreams come
true. May both of you always be together. May you both always live happily
together’, said the woman showering all her blessings on them. A faint smile
spread over Neha’s face. She could feel tears welling up her eyes. ‘You got the
money, now go. Don’t say unnecessary things’, she heard Shaurya shouting at the
woman. The woman walked away thanking Neha.
Neha’s tears left the confines of her eyes rushing
over her cheeks. Shaurya saw them too but chose to look away. Her teary eyes were
still fixed on his face. ‘I think I should make a move. I am getting late. Do
you want me to drop you somewhere or you would be fine without me?’ said
Shaurya.
‘I will go myself’ she replied. Shaurya asked her
to move a little bit and take her bag, started his bike and sped off saying
goodbye.
She kept on looking at him till he was visible in
the traffic. The enormity of his last few words hit her now. How would she be
fine without him? How odd of that woman to have blessed them togetherness on
the day they were breaking up. She knew that she had purposely given the beggar
more money because they always blessed in the same manner. Always. And more
than today, she had never hoped for a beggar’s blessings to come true.
This post is written as a part of April A to Z Challenge
2014 under Non-Themed category. I am doing two posts for this Challenge and Themed posts can be
found here.
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DeleteLoved it. Hope for a happy ending though :)
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DeleteI agree with Amrit..How do you do this? Loved it would be an understatement to what I felt.... Maybe it was her last attempt to save the relationship...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Naba. Yes, her last effort !!
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DeleteHope he sees the beauty in her gesture and hope, hope so much that they dont break up.... Touching one, Jyotsna :)
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DeleteVery touching and so well etched. That feeling of hope coupled with the idea of depair. Beautiful :)
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DeleteLovely story and hope that the beggar's blessing did come true.
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