Sunday 27 April 2014

Wish You Could See !!


I wish you could see
The pains I go through everyday
How much I miss you, I wish my words could say

I wish you could see
The restlessness within
How this heart suffers like it has committed some sins

I wish you could see
The tears behind the smile that I conceal
The way it tears me apart, how every moment of life I deal

I wish you could see
The longing I suffer for you
Those times when I do not know how to survive through

I wish you could see
The repentance of the past mistakes
How my entire being without you is almost at stake

I wish you could see
The loneliness in my eyes
How often, how often, remembering you they have cried

I wish you could see
The claustrophobia I get
Whenever the past haunts chocking me almost to death

I wish you could see
How my insides crave for you
That the love I felt was nothing but true

I wish you could see
Those crushed promises and the strangled ‘We’
 You the new He, Me a lost She 


This post is written as a part of April A to Z Challenge 2014 under Non-Themed category. I am doing two posts for this Challenge and Themed posts can be found here.


29 comments:

  1. Wonderful! New follower here. I'm stopping by from the "A to Z" challenge, and I look forward to visiting again.

    Sylvia
    http://www.writinginwonderland.blogspot.com/

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    1. Thank you so much Sylvia. Welcome to this space :)

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  2. Lovely poem! I wish I landed on this blog before :)
    I too crib sometimes through prose or poetry here -
    pearlsfromtheocean.blogspot.com

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  3. It's so painfully beautiful .....Jyostna :) U are such an amazing poet ....I simply love your poetry :)

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    1. Aww.. Thank you Sushree. How sweet of you to say that. :* :*

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  4. wow!! that was really sad and touching.. loved it!!

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  5. So much pain in these lines...but beautifully written.Thanks for dropping in at my blog earlier, Jyotsna.
    http://vinodinii.blogspot.in/2014/04/yearning-to-heard-monologues-with-mrm.html

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  6. 'We' gets strangled, 'He' is new, and 'Me' is lost ! What an imagery !!! Hats off, Jyotsna !

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  7. Sadness can be expressed so beautifully - your poem is a very good example of that. Very well done.

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  8. This is one of your best I have read ... too good, the pain and longing so beautifully evocative ... loved it buddy :-)

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    1. Aww.. Thanks Amrit. This coming from a poet whose poetry I love is something for me !!

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  9. beautifully expressed..

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  10. "I wish you could see

    Those crushed promises and the strangled ‘We’

    You the new He, Me a lost She "

    Superb lines! :)

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  11. Awesome is the right word... :))

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  12. How beautifully a poet/ess's thoughts weave a very beautiful art in words! Poems have a lot of power... And you own that power! TC! Keep smiling :)

    Regards,
    Sindhu
    Tantu
    The Arts & Me


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    1. That is one of the best things somebody has ever told me Sindhu. Thank you so so much. Lots of love to you too. Take care :)

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  13. Beautifully penned! Loved the flow :)

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  14. Love the lines Jyotsna..very well expressed.. the last line is awesome ...

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  15. Thanks a lot Ashwini. Glad you liked this one :)

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